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hier unsere aktuellstes Akkustikballädchen:

Slave of my own

Put my gun out nobody there
I see the stationlight I feel my fear
the voyces forces my to do it now
So why can anybody help me out

Nobody there
I`m all alone

Cause I`m a slave of my own
Cause I`m a slave of my own
Cause I`m a slave of my own

My body sghivers I close my eyes
that was the last time I saw the light
The questions in my head were always there
Why is that life so unfair

Nobody there
I`m all alone

Cause I`m a slave of my own
Cause I`m a slave of my own
Cause I`m a slave of my own

Now everything is dark
and I ly on the floor
I didnt survived the game
I`m someone to blame

Nobody there
I`m all alone

Cause I`m a slave of my own
Cause I`m a slave of my own
Cause I`m a slave of my own

ah sorry für doppelpost hier is die andre net akkustik3
,ballade:

When I look into your eyes I get in another world
When I am with you I smell your sweet breth oh girl
And your skin so soft
And your lips I loved
It`s so easy to loose control
But I kno the truth
And I will find you
And you know I say it loud

I tried to love you
but you pushed me away
So I tried to hate you
but it wasn`t the same
Again I loved you
but I have to face it`s true
So honey what should I do

Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone

Please come to me I want you now
I`d liked to be the one somehow
can`t you imagine
that I love you
It is no legend
But It is the truth
And I will find you
And you know I shouted out

Please can´t you love
don´t push me away
I´d liked to hate you
but it isn´t the same
I wanna love you
but I have to face it´s true
But haney what can I do

Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone

When I look int your eyes
theres nothing I see
When I am with you
your aren`t with me
When I whisper in your ear
I feel you don`t hear ....anything
But I know it`s true
But I will find you
And you know I shuot out

I tried to love you
but you pushed me away
So I tried to hate you
but it wasn`t the same
Again I loved you
but I have to face it`s true
So honey what should I do

Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone

Now there is no hope
you allraedy to late
Now you are for ever away
I will never see your shade
And now I`m falling down
onto a fucking ground
I can`t life without you

Please can´t you love
don´t push me away
I´d liked to hate you
but it isn´t the same
I wanna love you
but I have to face it´s true
But honey what can I do

Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone

And I´m done
You left me alone
But still want you to know .....that I love you
But your already gone
And I know the truth
I will never find you
I wanna whisper in your ear

You never want me
you pushed me away
But I keep on loving you
it´s still the same
You don´t want to here me
I have to face it´s true
So I can´t do anything for you

Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you leave me alone
Why just can`t you get out my mind
Why just can`t you leave me alone

wunderbar. dafür gibt es aber den edith-button.

ein paar fehlerchen im englischen, wenn ich das anmerken darf, ansonsten eine typische kitsch-ballade

Also der obere gefällt mir um einiges besser als der untere

seh ich auchso! Viel bessa

ey kitch balladen rulen voll den hood!
so wo sinnd enn da fehler drinne? wär coll wennde mal die verbesserungen postest aba ich hab ihn ja ent geschrieben !^^ ich bin eher für die soli und die riffs zuständig!

Zitat

Original von Der_Stein
ey kitch balladen rulen voll den hood!
so wo sinnd enn da fehler drinne? wär coll wennde mal die verbesserungen postest aba ich hab ihn ja ent geschrieben !^^ ich bin eher für die soli und die riffs zuständig!

Z.B : " Why just can`t you get out OF my mind?
Notfalls per Slang gerichtet " outta my head"

mh ok werds usneren Sänger sagen hab ich wenigstens wieder nen Grund ihn richtig zu verprügeln!

Stil: trve fucking black metal

Titel: Jeder Schuß 'ne Tuss

Vorhaut im Reissverschluß
Einzige Erlösung
selbstzugefügter Todesschuß

Eicheleinriß!
Penisbruch!
Ei abgerissen!
Scheiss Tach!

Ei aufgespiesst beim Penispiercing
Nix da tschuldigung
Ich reiss es ab, des Piercers Ding

Hoden-Schaschlik!
rechts schon leer!
links'n Loch!
Schnauze voll!

Kleiderschrank zusammengebrochen
Blutüberströmt unter Brettern
Faxen dick, Ikea-Amoklauf

Lebenslänglich!
Gemeinschaftsdusche!
Seife aufheben!
Scheiss Leben!

Jeder Schuß 'ne Tuss!
Jeder Tod ein Idiot!
Jeder Hack 'nen Spack!
Jeder Stich ein Arschgesich!
Jeder Schuß 'ne Tooooooooooooossssssssss
*ins Mikro kotz*

wenn de mich fragst, ich sach nur: (was fürn scheiß)

Ich finds irgendwie geil

looool

Dem Hans sein Erwin: Das könnte ein typischer Sido-Rap sein.

Gruß
maxiii

Zitat

Original von Damage_Inc
das lied habe ich heute im deutschunterricht geschrieben, und ich bitte es auf keinem fall ernst zu nehmen

BAD BOY
You're so fucked up, man!
So dig yourself a deep hole,
jump in and die

DIE DIE DIE DIE
Bad Boy

So put away your new mobile,
and nevermind your small penis,
everyone already knows,
that your balls are completely missing

YOU'RE FULL OF SHIT

DIE DIE DIE DIE
Bad Boy

You're no pimp, you're just a whimp
you should be killed by a chimp
called bimbo

yooouuuu got a small wiener
got a small wiener
got no brain
...and a small wiener

BAD BOY

--

welch lyrische höchstleistung

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warum wurde dieser text eigentlich nie gewürdigt?

Hmm, warum wohl...?

Sei doch froh, dass niemand drüber ausgelassen hat.

Der Text von unserm Lied tut so aussschauen:

The strings of ignorance (so heißt das Lied)

Creep, on the ground, in front of my feet
'cause you, are nothing but a servant to me
You lie there on that golden floor
humiliate yourself just to make me smile

I dance with your head my shoes
You're attached to my strings ignorance
your mind's my partner I control the progress
You're attached to my strings of ignorance

Now, I'm gonna go out for a hunt
gonna wash myself in your blood
gonna be dancing on your graves
Now, I'm gonna carve your life blunt

I dance with your head as my shoes
You're attached to my strings of ignorance
your mind's my partner I control the progress
You're attached to my strings of ignorance (ja das ist der refrain)

the strings of ignorance, this little piece of trascendency
the strings of ignorance, this little thing that my power's addicted to
This game we play with fossile figures and the incidents as the field

I dance... (der refrainhalt wieder)

edit: Stammt von mir

Zu welcher Musikrichtung soll denn, der Text sein? Von der Richtung her liegt er mir nicht so, aber schon nicht schlecht geschrieben.

Sone Mischung zwischen Trivium und den MoP-Metallica...vllt nicht ganz so, was für dich?!